For those who aren't exactly sure of the animator's authenticity, try looking at those convenient bonus features :D! The concept art carried over quite seamlessly to the final animation!
I have to say, people don't get enough credit for making something so cerebral that is difficult to interpret, but i simply think that you wanted people to take their own meaning from this, as many great artists do!
Okay for a first!
I actually liked the animation of the main character the most, walking animations are a bit tricky... at least for me...
however, it wouldn't be fair if i were to rate this a high score just to be a nice guy to someone with his first animation! No hard feelings... I do see a lot of potential in your work!
A few of the graphics were actually good, by my standards; others.. not so much
The story was hard to follow, probably just because it was random
Overall.. it was quite messy, a few things were notable... it was just messy
Not that that is the worst thing ever to say about an animator, its just to encourage you to clean things up a bit in your future work :)
One final note, i'm not sure if its corrected by now, 'Adventures' is misspelled in the title... I don't want to nitpick, but i'm just the type of person who is bothered by those types of things!
Of over 1500 reviews, TEN scored this less than a five... I admire their bravery in expressing their opinions, but I am inclined to agree with the majority on this one! You paid so much attention to detail.. The art was so crisp and yet the animation was so fluid. All the audio and voice was so clear and smooth, and the lighting and color was tremendously executed. For example, the red light shining on the male character as the bus drove off.
And to top it all off, it was a likable story with all the pleasant cliches we like to see (not including hybrid tentacle monster-human babies). This doesn't deserve its place at number 2, it deserves a place at number 1!
i reley dont wan to say this, but i have to now.
this really impressed me and made me laugh the entire time!
everything was so cleverly placed and fluidly animated.. just... wow :D
P.S the only reson im giving this a 10 is beacuase you deserve it
I first saw this last year, completely unaware of the whole universe that is C&H.
I became an instant fan. I then read all of the comics (even today's) and saw every short. All of you are completely hilarious! Too bad all of the top 15 submissions are all scored 4.48. I can't even begin to think how any human being can vote lower than five on this!! Those people have no sense of what is good or funny... Anyways, this is gonna be REALLY hard to top you guys.
Must have accidentally skipped over rating option
But still pretty funny lol, if you want good praise don't be one of those jerks who says it's for everyone. Kids love Pokemon, but Meowth looking for sex is not something that kids would expect to see. This should be rated M at the very least :3. That way you can get the correct audience and optimal ratings!
So change it, it doesn't necessarily have to be a troll submission. This has at least SOME potential.
My favorite part is when he's at the store buying all that beer and it plays the waiting for the bus music in the background ;D
seems awfully familiar <=.
this was actually very good, still missing a few of the thrilling elements from battle scenes of SMBZ, but most of them were captured quite well. I don't think you should change a thing =)
4/5, 8/10, Thumbs up
This is a loop, you should probably add some script to this. Firstly, this needs a preloader. Pretty easy to get, just download it directly from the site. Also the last frame should stop with a replay button(screen) also pretty simple. Finally, the song repeats itself too early, so you get a double song when the flash loops. A TIINY amount of script can solve all of this. So I recommend taking some script tutorials, only then will you be able to "spice things up" because flashes without even a bit of script can fall apart pretty easily.
Yea i would but for this project we couldn't use scrips.
The graphics were good, but the animation was very jerky and sometimes doesn't make any physical sense lol, like the part with the car o-o. Also it seemed sort of lazy at times, like the part where he just reaches up and shoots lighting at the bulb, and then it just shows some eyes moving around with some sound effects. I don't know, it can definitely use some improvement . . . good thing this isn't the final version =D
yeah! it need a hell of an improvement
don´t even thing this is the end!
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